One day I was walking through a park and saw a lever flick. Crash bang clunk there are walls all around me. Then I saw a button click chewwww it opened up a secret room. I went down clink clonk clink clonk. All I saw was a pond of water. Woosh, splish, splash.
I thought about jumping into the pond, but then I thought it could just be another trap. I’ll jump in it to see if it’s a trap or not. Splash I jumped in. It was really cold, but it was worth it, it took me to an underground submarine. I explored it for a while and found lots of things.
It was getting late so I decided to head home. I left the submarine and flicked the lever and walked home. The next day I went back and decided to make it my own little hide out.
When it got boring tick tock tick tock. I asked some of my friends to come and play. I searched……… I found all sorts of different rooms like a kitchen and a lounge room. Then the TV turned on ssss Breaking news a dog has escaped barb wired fences with no holes.
How We decided to make this story up:
For the 1st and 4th paragraph we used a special paragraph thing that had lots of different things on it like Intense feelings, Sound effects and questions. I chose sound effects to tie up the ending. Eg. Woosh, Splash, Clink, Clonk.
For the 2nd and 3rd paragraph we used the paragraph sandwich. Ts=Topic sentence Ss=Supporting sentence Ds=Detail sentence Cs=Conclusion sentence. So this is the way we had to write it.
But we could have used as many SS and DS sentences as we wanted but the whole story together had to be 4 paragraphs and no more or no less.